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kalavier

6 days ago

umm.. i think its well executed ending?, rushed actually, glad that the author make protagonist cherish the playthrough with his friends, but the author really try to emphasized the "emptiness" after protagonist achieved the bad ending. that's how the ending can be described too, not a great or legendary ending nor give reader a satisfaction of an ending. the ending feels... empty personal thoughts : wth with this ending mannn, this could do better, i mean you can make an ending that feels like this, but bring satisfaction for the antiklimaks, bruh, maybe you can do it your way like this, but add some spice~ maybe make the protagonist feels relieved, even if it can't be from the bad end, make him relieved that he had a fun playing that game for the last time, just put the feeling empty thingy aside, put it on the last panel maybe. or maybe gave satisfaction by makin the villain bosses got a taste of his karma??, or make the game shut down, broke to trash?! (yes I'm reminding you that the boss that we want to choked,smack,punch startled him to death were safe and sound), for the concept of bad ending... can't critique it though, the concept was decent, a bit fresh?, not that fresh but for manhwas it's good, you could've seen it multiple time in movies, or novel, but that's alright glad the player got their life to go on, the mc life to go on, they take oasis from us tough, aghhh~